I can't tell if I simply didn't like the flow of the script or if the story was just dull but something was off here. As I cleared the halfway point I did not want to read any further. I was bored. After the 2/3 mark it started to become interesting to me. I wanted to figure out if she was dead or not. I should read it again to see if I simply missed the subtle climaxes of these scenes. Script rating 2/5.
(4.00 out of 10)